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Old 10-24-2012, 04:09 PM
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I've been so desperate to find out what happens in this story that I've been much less critical of Brandon's writing than some have. However, this chapter and the Mat chapter that was released are laughably bad. The dialogue is very banal and forced to such a degree that I have laughed out loud while reading it.

It is very disappointing to see this happening and I pray that the full book does not share many of these characteristics. I get "not trying to emulate RJ's style", but it should still be written well. I have never read any of Brandon's other work, is it as bad as this is?

I like what Terez said earlier, because it quite literally feels like fan fiction