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I just had an idea (which may be rubbish).

Why don't a group of us write a story.

We write 1000 +/- 20 words each. First one of us starts and when he/she/it have written ~1000 words it gets posted as part 1. Writer nr 2 take up the mantle and continue the story, writing his/her/its ~1000 words, and so on.

It could be fun.
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It could be done.

It would need a minimum of 4 writers.

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Would be interesting if there were seven writers (7 spokes) and it just turned round and round.
Hm, where did I get that from?
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Why not just make it so that anyone who wants can write a chapter? Or, this can be pretty funny when everyone writes a paragraph, or even a sentence - it can go some pretty stupid places. Not sure that's what you were after, but I've tried it that way before. Anyway, I'm in.
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As am I. So long as it is done by the paragraph (or more). The staggered nature of time on the boards would make anything less either nonsensical or excruciating. Dibs on the penultimate chapter.
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I'm in. My contribution to the story will be a mathematician named Frederique who is lost inside his local grocery store trying to find panko bread crumbs.
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I think we should just see where the wind takes us.
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I think we should just see where the wind takes us.
Anyone who wants to go first and establish some of those things?

I can do it if no one else wants to, but I prefer to be second or third.
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Ok, I'll start.

The thing won't be up for a day or so though.
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The stink was horrific.
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Luca sat in a corner and watched the other prisoners. They all sat quiet as well. When is it my turn to be led out and tortured, he thought. The guards had started to torture some of the prisoners in their quest for answers. The screams from the last time someone was collected by the guards had ended some time ago. Luca had no idea why he was in this prison. He had just been buying some baking spices for master Stamm at Nedinas place. They had stormed in and arrested everyone there. They all sat here in this place, except for the two who'd been led away for interrogation.
He took in the dark room again. It was a square room, six pases across, stone walls and an iron door. The only light coming in was daylight from the lattice at the top of one wall and the light from torches through an opening in the door. Outside the door were the prison guards with their shock sticks. They had bludgeoned prisoners, two times so far, for being too rowdy. One of the other prisoners walked over to Luca.
“What do you want”, Luca asked quietly.
“I have a request to ask of you”, the stranger whispered.
Luca stayed silent.
“In case I don't make it, you've got to take a message to countess de'Lidra or her senior officers”.
“But I'm just a bakers assistant”, Luca protested, “they'd never meet with me”.
“Nevertheless you will try in case I fail”.
Luca nodded reluctantly.
“I had hoped we'd been rescued by now. I can't wait any longer. I'm going to make a run for it the next time they open the door.”
“But that's impossible”, Luca protested.
“Perhaps it is, but I'm going to give it a try.”
The stranger shifted position slightly so that he could whisper even more quietly.
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"What is the information, what should I say”, Luca asked.
“The message is that Kargon has the keystone, but don't give them the information until you are certain that it's the countess people."

A short while later Arond seized his chance and made it passed the first three guard before he was overwhelmed by kicks and shock sticks. It looked like Arond wouldn't meet his freedom before he met his death.
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Okay, I'll go next.

Ordinarily, there was no way Jasind would have seen a client after hours. Ordinarily, he'd have told them to go to the Warmaker if they bothered him as he was heading home for the night. But then, ordinarily his clients weren't clearly distressed, weeping women. Expensively dressed, distressed, weeping women.

He ushered the woman - no, girl, she was much younger than he'd first thought - off the rain-soaked street, into his office on the first floor. He placed a reassuring arm around her and showed her to the seat in front of his desk.

"They said you were good," she sobbed, "They said I could trust you."

That much was true at least. Jasind was the best there was in the city. Unfortunately for him, he was also the most honourable, and not given to taking the bribes and making the murky deals that the other Freelance Manhunters would, just to get ahead. That was why he was in this part of town, rather than up in the Heights.

He leaned forward over the desk. Unfortunately, his notesmith Lucina had already gone home, or he'd have asked her to make some tea while he tried to calm the girl down. "Calm down, my dear," he said, doing his best to be soothing. "Why don't you tell me your name?"

Peacebringer be blessed, she stopped crying. "It's Ariella." She said, relaxing a little.

"And what can I do for you, Ariella?"

"It's my betrothed," she said, "He's disappeared."

Jasind leaned back in his chair. This was a story he'd heard before. "Ariella, I hate to be the one to tell you this, sweeteyes, but he's probably just got cold feet and run off."

"You don't understand." The girl said. "No-one else knows."

"Knows what?"

"That we were to be married."

Jasind breathed out. This had gone from simple to murky in no time flat. "How's that, sweeteyes?" He asked, "Goldborn girl like you, getting married without even your family's involvement?"

"He was brassborn." She said. Murkier and murkier by the minute. "I couldn't tell them, but I was - we'd - I was in love with him!" She finally managed, then started sobbing again.

"Okay," he said. His initial assessment changed slightly. If the guy had been Goldborn or even Silverborn, he'd still have thought it was just cold feet. But a Brassborn running away from marriage to a Goldborn woman? That was just crazy. Things just kept getting murkier. "Why don't you tell me a bit about this guy, sweeteyes?"

"Like what?"

"Like his name. How you met. Anything you think might be important."

"Okay," she stopped crying again. "His name's Luca. He works in the bakery my House gets bread from. Sometimes we order sweetrolls and cakes from them as well, for parties and the like. The day we met, mother had asked me to go and order a large cake for a ball that evening. The minute I saw him, I knew we were for each other. It sounds silly, but it was the way he ran his fingers through the dough he was kneading. It was just so... thorough, and caring."

She carried on like that, about how this guy Luca was the sweetest, caring-est, nicest baker's assistant that ever lived. Jasind just sat and listened. Ariella wasn't the first Goldborn girl to fall for a Commonborn man, and nor would she be the last. But Jasind had a soft spot for young women in distress. He made up his mind to check it out. Finally, she ran out of puff. "Okay. I'll check it out." He said.

"Oh, thank you! Thank you!" She burst out.

"Just one thing. You say no-one else knew about the engagement, right?" She nodded. "So it was just you two?" She nodded again, then opened her mouth as if to speak. "I need to know, Sweeteyes."

"I told my best friend."

Ah-ha, Jasind thought. "What's her name?" He asked.

"Anyara." She paused. "Anyara de'Lidra."

Jasind whistled. Anyara de'Lidra was the daughter of Countess de'Lidra, the ruler of the city. This was starting to look very murky indeed.

ETA: The one thing we probably should agree on is how long we want this to be. There are five of us, so it should definitely be a multiple of five chapters/sections each (I may have got carried away and broken my own rule about paragraphs, but having had a go, I think chapters is better) so as TU can get the penultimate chapter as he desires. Is five chapters each enough?
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I was thinking more like 2-3 each. But yeah, I'll take every 4th. 4 is my favorite number. And I like what I see so far...at first it looks like a case of wrongplace/wrongtime, but then a more sinister story begins to emerge. (it is fantasy, right?)
It's fantasy, but I wasn't sure where to go from Tomp's start, then a little voice whispered "changing the genre to film noir would be funny", so that's what I did. But it's still fantasy, just with a dash of noir now.
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